Feedback Of My Writing Style

Feedback:
Writing style: it is excellent because this is essay style, and writer who chosen times new roman and the number of lines is twelve, and also there is a double space between each newline.
Organization: I believe the organization is perfect and good style because it has introduction, body and a conclusion. Also, this essay has title in the beginning and each paragraph has space in the first sentence, and the writer who also used the honor code. People can read each paragraph easily because there is space between each sentence and paragraph. The introduction is obvious and has general sentences in the beginning. Certainly, the writer selected strong and essential vocabulary in this essay. In addition to, the writer who explained something interesting in the introduction that will be significant for the reader.
The role of the nursing educator: I agree with your concepts and idea in this paragraph because I think your expressions are reasonable and correct. The nurse educator could to encourage their students and provide essential things about nursing for