Gathering Blue 
“Mother?”
There was no reply. She hadn’t expected one. Her mother had been dead now for four days, and Kira could tell that the last of the spirit was drifting away. (p. 1)
This book is about a girl named Kira who is left orphaned and physically flawed in a civilization that shuns and discards the weak, she faces a frighteningly uncertain future where people want her gone, but she has a gift that the leaders want which keeps her alive.
Thesis: change of laws
Adults, infants, and children shouldn't be put in a field because they are different or have something different about them. Someone who is different could be the best person you know. Even if someone isn't the same as everyone else doesn't mean they aren't a person too.
Why do we have these laws what do they protect us from? There should be better laws that would help us in the future or today. The laws that should be changed are women & girls should be able to read, tykes & kids shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent, people shouldn't be taken to the field if their different.
Conclusion
Girls and women should be able to read and write. Writing is a very important thing. If you can't write then life is harder. If there are signs put up and women can't read then they won't know what's going on.
Tykes and children shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent. Childhood should be a happy thing, not where you have to work. Most children and tykes are playful and don't want to have to work a lot. It is not good for tykes or children to stay indoors all day.
There should be better laws that would help us in the future or today. Women shouldn't be able to read because the men are the providers. The laws that should be changed are women and girls should be able to read, tykes and children shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent, people shouldn't be taken to the field if there different. We should make these some of our laws because they would make
There was no reply. She hadn’t expected one. Her mother had been dead now for four days, and Kira could tell that the last of the spirit was drifting away. (p. 1)
This book is about a girl named Kira who is left orphaned and physically flawed in a civilization that shuns and discards the weak, she faces a frighteningly uncertain future where people want her gone, but she has a gift that the leaders want which keeps her alive.
Thesis: change of laws
Adults, infants, and children shouldn't be put in a field because they are different or have something different about them. Someone who is different could be the best person you know. Even if someone isn't the same as everyone else doesn't mean they aren't a person too.
Why do we have these laws what do they protect us from? There should be better laws that would help us in the future or today. The laws that should be changed are women & girls should be able to read, tykes & kids shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent, people shouldn't be taken to the field if their different.
Conclusion
Girls and women should be able to read and write. Writing is a very important thing. If you can't write then life is harder. If there are signs put up and women can't read then they won't know what's going on.
Tykes and children shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent. Childhood should be a happy thing, not where you have to work. Most children and tykes are playful and don't want to have to work a lot. It is not good for tykes or children to stay indoors all day.
There should be better laws that would help us in the future or today. Women shouldn't be able to read because the men are the providers. The laws that should be changed are women and girls should be able to read, tykes and children shouldn't have to have jobs even if they have a special talent, people shouldn't be taken to the field if there different. We should make these some of our laws because they would make