the last book of the Winnie sires is when they go to summer camp. Winnie's boyfriend lars is a year older than her and loves her. her best friend's cinnamon and dinah are total weirdoes. worst of all, Sandra is going to collage!!!my faveret part of this book is the needlepoint bathroom scene. "there was a framed sign above the toilet,and it was needlepointed, and i said, If It's Yellow,Let It Mellow. If It;s Brown Flush It Down. this is my favorite scene because it is hilarious.…
Ida “Dad, I’m so excited for this play! I can’t believe you bought us the tickets for the play where President Lincoln is going!” Ida said. Ida is a 13 year old girl, who lives in a small home with her father. Her mother died while giving birth to her.…
"Lowanna?"I waited for a moment before opening the door. There asleep snoring like a 68 year old man was my best friend. "Let's go Anna, time to go to school. " I opened her window and in return I heard a groan from behind me. I heard a knock at the door.…
OVERALL IMPRESSION: It is a really well crafted story that grabs my attention from beginning all the way to the end. You don’t give any time for the “viewers” to be bored as we are thrown right into the thick of things from the get go, first the surgery of Freeman and a few scenes after she’s in the war. I also believe that you created a living breathing world of the war, or more specifically the hospital in the war. The way the injured soldiers react to Dr. Murdoch all contribute to the feeling of the world. You could maybe possibly cut to what’s going on in the actual war, and show how the soldiers get injured? I think that will add just another level to this already brilliant story, but not really necessary.…
Probably not, but guess what you’re going to get it anyway. It will probably surprise you that it isn’t them treating Sam like a supporting character (and destroying his character) or the fact that I couldn’t care less about the Lucifer baby story line at all. Like I honestly care about it less than I did about Amara and I hated that story line.…
Final Words “What would you do if you were me?” Drew asked his best friend in the world. “I honestly don’t know,” Ken replied. “I can’t believe Lea did this to you,” he added with sadness in his voice. They were sitting in Drew’s soft yellow kitchen, akin to each other, looking at the letter Lea had written.…
Susanna Moss was in a Pizza place, it was a get together where all her friends were together. Today something felt off, everyone had energy but they weren’t giving her any attention as usual. Usually, when she gets together with people, people will listen to her and do what she says since she’s a natural leader. She Suddenly felt her phone buzzing in her back pocket. She looked on her phone and it said that Addison was calling her.…
In a city as large as this one there are police. Blue coats and caps devour their body and soul, for if you are a officer that is all you are. You have to take pride in your work and appreciate what you do. Fred is a policeman but not like others.…
I decided it's time. I stepped foot outside, breathed the cool air and started walking . . . It's been aver a week. I'm weak and frail.…
So you'll be with that jenny downstairs while Nosi and I are upstairs? Elizabeth lives with me. She's not going anywhere. -…
Once upon a time, there was a small town called Everbloom. In the, dense, green, woods that bordered that town lived a fiery “orphan” girl named Scarlet. The 17 year old had blazing red hair, ash grey eyes and olive skin that, from being in the woods most of her life, faded to relatively pale. She was known to be mysterious, but really she was just like any other anti-social teen. Well, sorta.…
Character, plot, settings are fictional. Sorry if it’s the same as other story and many grammars and spelling errors. I was inspired by several stories so the story may have similar plots and it’s my first time going to write long ass story. WARNING:…
Dr Phil: Today we have a guest that witnessed a major issue going on in our society today. Please put your hands together for Melinda Sordino. *Crowd applauds* Dr. Phil: Hello, Melinda Melinda: Hello, I’m so thankful to be here today to share my story and thoughts. Dr. Phil: So would you mind going ahead and explaining your situation, being all truth and no lies.…
The music. The sweet, sweet music. It’s melodic tone so alluring, so enchanting. Relaxing, as she rode away, with the strangers that she didn’t want to know. Connie woke up with a jolt.…
“Buttercup, you can do it!” That was my nickname, given by Shawn. As corny as it was, anytime he called me Buttercup I pushed myself. The rain, the heat, the bugs. I was so out of my comfort zone.…