Peer Feedback Sheet Analysis
Peer Review Feedback Sheet
Use this sheet to conduct a peer review for at least two of your classmates in Weeks 6 and 8. Week 6 will be a peer review of Assignment 2.1, and Week 8 will be a peer review of Assignment 3.1. After you fill it in completely, save it in a document and post it as a direct reply in the Peer Review Thread to the student whose work you reviewed. Remember that you’ll complete this twice, a different one for two different classmates. Peer Review Feedback SheetInstructions to Reviewer: Provide at least one specific feedback note (a tip, suggestion, or explanation of why you liked or disliked something the writer did) in each box in the right column. Use professional and respectful tones.Reviewer: Tiffany N. HudginsStudent Reviewed: Kimberly GrossAssignment Reviewed: Public Needs to Know Essay | Criteria | Feedback/Tips/Suggestions | …show more content…
Content:Read the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Was the main idea easily identifiable?-Were ideas clear and illustrated adequately with examples and details?-Was the thesis statement found at the end of the introduction?-Was the essay properly concluded by summarizing the main ideas?-Was the essay written with a professional approach that kept the audience in mind?-Was there something the writer could have said or explained better, and how so?
| There was no clear thesis statement. | Organization:Read the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Was the transition from Introduction to Body Paragraphs to Conclusion noticeable? -Was it apparent the writer carefully planned the essay before writing it?-Did ideas flow smoothly from one to the next?-Was there something the writer could have done differently to have a more structured essay? | - There wasn’t a concise transition from introduction to body paragraphs.
| MechanicsRead the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Did the writer have little or no spelling errors? If there were errors, give a couple examples.-Did the writer use proper grammatical structure throughout the essay? If there were errors, give a couple examples.-Did the writer use correct punctuation? If not please provide examples. -Did the writer unnecessarily address the reader (you, your)? Did the writer make the essay unnecessarily personal by using the first person (I, me, my, etc.)?-Was there anything the writer should have done differently with mechanics? | | FormattingRead the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Did the writer use Times New Roman font style at 12 point font size?-Did the writer have margins set correctly all around?-Were there indents at the beginning of each paragraph?-Was the essay correctly double-spaced?-Was the essay in left-alignment (except for the title, which should be centered)?-Did it appear the writer used APA guidelines on all parts of the essay, including the title page, reference list, and in-text citations? | - Yes the writer did use Times New Roman font and 12 point size-All margins were set correctly-Yes there were indents at the beginning of each paragraph-Correctly double-spaced-In correct left assignment-Did not follow correct APA guidelines | Reviewer Note: When you complete all boxes in the right column fully, save this document, and then post it as a reply to the student’s posted essay in the Peer Review Thread. Once you have completed this Peer Review Sheet for two different peers and you have posted your own essay in the Peer Review Thread, your work for this assignment is complete. | Note to student whose work was reviewed: This Peer Review will not in any way affect your score on the essay assignments involved. |
Use this sheet to conduct a peer review for at least two of your classmates in Weeks 6 and 8. Week 6 will be a peer review of Assignment 2.1, and Week 8 will be a peer review of Assignment 3.1. After you fill it in completely, save it in a document and post it as a direct reply in the Peer Review Thread to the student whose work you reviewed. Remember that you’ll complete this twice, a different one for two different classmates. Peer Review Feedback SheetInstructions to Reviewer: Provide at least one specific feedback note (a tip, suggestion, or explanation of why you liked or disliked something the writer did) in each box in the right column. Use professional and respectful tones.Reviewer: Tiffany N. HudginsStudent Reviewed: Kimberly GrossAssignment Reviewed: Public Needs to Know Essay | Criteria | Feedback/Tips/Suggestions | …show more content…
Content:Read the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Was the main idea easily identifiable?-Were ideas clear and illustrated adequately with examples and details?-Was the thesis statement found at the end of the introduction?-Was the essay properly concluded by summarizing the main ideas?-Was the essay written with a professional approach that kept the audience in mind?-Was there something the writer could have said or explained better, and how so?
| There was no clear thesis statement. | Organization:Read the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Was the transition from Introduction to Body Paragraphs to Conclusion noticeable? -Was it apparent the writer carefully planned the essay before writing it?-Did ideas flow smoothly from one to the next?-Was there something the writer could have done differently to have a more structured essay? | - There wasn’t a concise transition from introduction to body paragraphs.
| MechanicsRead the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Did the writer have little or no spelling errors? If there were errors, give a couple examples.-Did the writer use proper grammatical structure throughout the essay? If there were errors, give a couple examples.-Did the writer use correct punctuation? If not please provide examples. -Did the writer unnecessarily address the reader (you, your)? Did the writer make the essay unnecessarily personal by using the first person (I, me, my, etc.)?-Was there anything the writer should have done differently with mechanics? | | FormattingRead the rhetorical questions below, and provide at least one feedback note to the right.-Did the writer use Times New Roman font style at 12 point font size?-Did the writer have margins set correctly all around?-Were there indents at the beginning of each paragraph?-Was the essay correctly double-spaced?-Was the essay in left-alignment (except for the title, which should be centered)?-Did it appear the writer used APA guidelines on all parts of the essay, including the title page, reference list, and in-text citations? | - Yes the writer did use Times New Roman font and 12 point size-All margins were set correctly-Yes there were indents at the beginning of each paragraph-Correctly double-spaced-In correct left assignment-Did not follow correct APA guidelines | Reviewer Note: When you complete all boxes in the right column fully, save this document, and then post it as a reply to the student’s posted essay in the Peer Review Thread. Once you have completed this Peer Review Sheet for two different peers and you have posted your own essay in the Peer Review Thread, your work for this assignment is complete. | Note to student whose work was reviewed: This Peer Review will not in any way affect your score on the essay assignments involved. |