Personal Narrative: She's Lessons?

“Liam come out here now!” I heard my Mother scream. She told me I was going to take horseback lessons for two years. Probably not enough to learn a lot, but I guess it could be fun. I told her I did not want to do it that long, so she would set up more lessons because that's how she was. If you did not want to do something she made you do it for even longer. It was definitely easier to get what you wanted since you could use it to your advantage. That was when she changed it to 8 years, which was great for me. “Kick the horse harder Liam. He will not move if you do not.” My instructor insisted. “I am trying how much harder can he take a kick to his gut!” I yelled over the hooves stomping on the cold, hard yellow sand. “He will not move
She did tell me to pull back, but I did not listen. I could not hear her over the wind whistling in my ear. He finally stopped when a beautiful girl named Alexa came in the ring on a horse named Pixie. She ran right by me at least 29 times. Ok, maybe I exaggerated it was more like 9 times she ran right by me. I think my horse liked hers because whenever she would trot by he would stop and let her go by. Mother had signed me up to compete on the horse. She was even thinking about buying him since I had became good with him and he listened to me. But the problem was I was not the best rider at all and my mother did not know that and she would only accept me as her son if I did not get first place every time. This would be the toughest challenge ever. I knew i would not win so I asked her if i could have a year of competing without being disowned to get better at riding. But than Alexa who had always won first place felt bad for me so she started to teach me how to ride better on this certain horse. “You can do it Liam it is not that hard to get him to canter. He is just being stubborn give him a reason not to.” Alexa yelled over the sound of the birds
I need your help still.” the girl asked. “I can no longer teach you, you have learned too much.” I explained. “How is that possible if I can not even beat you in one competition!” she screamed. “I can not teach you anymore I am sorry.” I told her but she knew I was lying. It was the championships so I had to win. So I started sending in a few animals in the ring. It is not like I am doing anything wrong. A few people had a few broken limbs but it is not my fault the horse got scared of the mice and the snakes. Of course Adrianna noticed me sending the mice and snakes out there and you could tell she was disappointed with me. She then told my mother and they both got red with anger. “How could you do something like that. You are just like Alexa. I do not understand what made you become this way and to think I was starting to get more feelings for you.” said Adrianna. That made me start thinking. That was when I realized that horseback riding was the problem it made me competitive. I had to do something. The problem was the only way would be to quit horseback riding which I did not want to do. I had to quit though since the problem came than. So I quit which would be better for everyone