revision plan

Revision Plan The feedback I got back from my peers was the same throughout the workshop. What my peers told me was that I needed to be more detailed, because I did not reach the limit of three pages. They also told me to make sure that I not only talk about one concept but that I also talk about the other author. They told me to make sure that I even out the arguments, meaning that I give enough information on both concepts. I learned from my essay that I need to develop my writing techniques more, and learn how to out my thoughts out on my paper. I learned that writing a paper is not only difficult for me but also to my peers. They struggled a lot with getting their thoughts down on paper just like I did. I learned that writing essays is not easy for anyone, especially when writing under pressure. I learned that sometimes leaving your writing for last minute can be a bad thing because they begin to write nonsense in order to get there work done. My peers writing assignments showed me what are the correct things to add to my paper, and what not to add to my paper. I need to add more to my essay because I have not given a full thought of my essay, and also I have not given as much information as I can about the second reading. I need to add this information because in my peer review I was told to not talk so much about the first reader, if I’m not going to give the same attention to the second writer. Something else that I need to include in my essay is a conclusion because I need to develop a strong closing and captivate the readers attention and leave them wanting more. A sentence that I would like to wear “ Writing has never been the easiest thing for me to do. Putting the thoughts in my mind down on paper has always been a struggle for me”. During my next draft, I am planning to make it long enough, to make sure he meets the special requirements. Also, I want to extend the content of the readings and be able to explain everything more in