South America Colonized Thesis

Thesis Statement: America should not colonize South America because people will suffer, and groups of different people could be made that create more violence.
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Topic Sentence: The people of South America would suffer if America would colonize them.
Supporting Evidence #1: “However, he licensed companies that brutally exploited Africans by forcing them to collect sap from rubber plants. At least 10 million Congolese died due to the abuses inflicted during Leopold's rule.”World history: Patterns of interactions. (2009). p#774

Explanation:They were forced to work as they were exploited into working, from being forced to work that hard around 10 million died just because how hard they worked. They would need workers to work
Transition Sentence: As a result from all the violence groups were made to try to fix the problem.
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Topic Sentence: Colonizing South America could make America make different groups
Supporting Evidence #1:)Under Belgium rule rwanda was made into two different groups the tutsi and the hutu. The hutu was made as a work force and the tutsi were used as extended belgium rule.McCormack, Pete. (2006)

Explanation: The making of these two groups caused many deaths and started violence between the groups just because one was treated better and had more
It has wealthy fisheries and ports on the Caribbean Sea, Atlantic Ocean and the Pacific Ocean. South America: Resources. (2016).

Explanation:South America has many useful resources that America will find useful and help them as they will need those resources.
Refutation (Why is your original position still accurate?):However If America were to colonize South America, violence would start
Evidence to refute the Opposing Opinion:“In 1967, Nigeria experienced civil war when the largely igbo southwest region attempted to secede to form the independent state of Biafra. The rebellion ended in 1970, when the leaders of the revolution surrendered. It is estimated ended in 1970, when the leaders of the revolution surrendered. It is estimated that up to 3 million people died as result of fighting, disease, and starvation during the 30 month conflict.Manzo, Kerry. (2012).p#20

Explanation:If America were to take South America people would fight back, a rebellion could start because people would not just hand over their land, just like how the people of Nigeria had a civil war because one side was for being conquered and they other was not they actually wanted to secede from