By briefly starting off by saying “there are countless ways to make yourself feel lousy. Here’s one more” it arouses curiosity and makes the reader want to continue reading to find out what the author is talking about (Copeland, 2011). Copeland uses vivid words to make her point more realistic throughout the article. Her word choice as to why she thinks Facebook is putting us into competition with one another is absurd. The way she states that it is making us sadder every day than it is making us happy is questionable. It is questionable because many people may come to agree with her and others disagree. We are all humans and we have a tendency to think we are all not competitive, but in reality we are always competing with one another. She used words like “lonely, vulnerable and crummy” to describe how people feel about seeing others personal lives on Facebook. Copeland clearly uses strong words like these to show us that the cause of us seeing the things we see on Facebook is going to affect us in the long
By briefly starting off by saying “there are countless ways to make yourself feel lousy. Here’s one more” it arouses curiosity and makes the reader want to continue reading to find out what the author is talking about (Copeland, 2011). Copeland uses vivid words to make her point more realistic throughout the article. Her word choice as to why she thinks Facebook is putting us into competition with one another is absurd. The way she states that it is making us sadder every day than it is making us happy is questionable. It is questionable because many people may come to agree with her and others disagree. We are all humans and we have a tendency to think we are all not competitive, but in reality we are always competing with one another. She used words like “lonely, vulnerable and crummy” to describe how people feel about seeing others personal lives on Facebook. Copeland clearly uses strong words like these to show us that the cause of us seeing the things we see on Facebook is going to affect us in the long