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Adalyn and Caden have been dating for 6 months and a few days. This is the first weekend they haven't been together since they have been dating. Adalyn is going dress shopping for prom with her friends today. Adalyn and her friends are trying on dresses.
The salesperson asks the girls “What size dresses do they need?”
Adalyn says “I need a size 2 or 4.”
The salesperson brought back a size two and four in the dress she liked. She tried both of them on to see how they both fit. She noticed she has put on some weight because she couldn't zip the back of the dresses.
So Emily (the salesperson) went to go look for a size 6 in the dress that Adalyn wanted, she brought it back and said “You're a lucky girl this is the last one.”
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When they pulled up at the house Adalyn ran upstairs to take the pregnancy test. The first one came out negative, but Adaline didn't believe it so a few days later Adaline told Adalyn to try it again and all three of them came out positive. Adalyn started crying because she is only 17 years old and she tried calling her boyfriend Caden to tell him she was pregnant but his phone went straight to voicemail. Adalyn tried to grab the car keys to go tell him, but Adaline and Taylor stopped her. They told her they will try to get hold of him so while Adalyn went to lay down to think about what she was going to tell her parents the rest of the girls started Snapchatting Caden and Adaline tried to call him again and it started ringing but he didn't answer. Taylor went to talk to Adalyn because she didn't think she should be alone. Taylor went into the kitchen to get something to eat, then went upstairs to blow up Caden’s snapchat some more. She got tired and started looking at people's stories. She saw Caden posted something so she tapped on it. It was another girl in his bed, she tells all the girls and Adaline started crying again. Adaline left and didn't tell anyone where she was going. The twin's parents just got home from work and heard her crying and talking to Taylor. Her parents didn't say anything to her they …show more content…
and why are you crying?” Ivy ignored the questions all she could say is
“I'm sorry!”
(Adalyn is mad and starts to yell at Ivy)
“Why are you sorry? And why are you in Caden's house?”
“Cadence was cheating on you with me, I'm so sorry.”
Adalyn hung up the phone. Ivy called Adaline and asked was here parents was home.
Adaline says “Yes why?”
“ I think they just killed Caden.”
“What are you talking about? No they didn't they’re sleep.” and hung up the phone.
Adaline goes downstairs and looks in the bag of stuff that she bought earlier that day and it was gone so Adaline went to Caden's house and looked around to see if the killer left something behind. When Adaline walked in Caden's room, she saw the window was left open. She found a fingerprint on the window. Adaline got this ID thing for her birthday last year and she's so happy she gets to use it. After 3 days of her trying to figure out how to use it, she finally found a fingerprint. And she was so shocked when she found out who Caden’s killer

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