I kind of have an idea where this is going, but some suggestions would be very nice. I decided to listen to some advice from my other story (go read it!) that told me to elaborate, so I decided to try it when writing this. Don’t have an account and are unable to comment? Get one! Wattapd is free and awesome. Comment, vote and leave feedback! ---Lauryn
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Jackie couldn't stop tossing and turning. She was dreaming, the same dream she had every night for the past year. Every time she laid down in bed, she knew it would happen. That didn’t stop it from being horrific and have her wake up out of breath and some nights, screaming. In her dream she could see the smoke rise in the air and fan out over ceiling and form a …show more content…
“ For the first 30 minutes after the doors open we are supposed to run around and look like happy little kids. Then they set up meetings between families and kids that fit their criteria. The meetings are 10 minutes to an hour long depending on if they like you. Tori and I walked into the main hall of the home, there were 3 rooms, one for little kids, one for 7-12 year olds and one for the teenagers at the far end. Each one was set up according to what that age group would do. The one with small children had tons of toys and shiny things, the next room had a TV with SpongeBob and some other toys like a few Gameboys and action figures. The teen room had 2 couches, magazines and a TV. I plopped down on a couch beside to Tori. There was another girl on the couch on the other side of her. On the other couch there were 5 girls piled on watching “Say Yes to The Dress”. A few people walked into the other rooms, some were couples playing the babies, and some were couples with a child talking to the older kids, nobody came over to us. Non-parent couples tend to stay with the younger kids, and the ones with a kid go to the 7-12 year olds, it must be fun to pick out a sister for your