Working your hardest, trying it your best, and meeting the needs of thirty freshman is more than the work itself. It’s torture. The Beverage Wars is the torture of exalting yourself into a whirlwind of not only your own ideas, but four other perspectives that may or may not be close to freshman thinking. Phew! The freshman class must have “exploded into seniority” by sipping on Volcanic Jungle, because they most certainly do not let age stop them from voicing their opinions. Freshmen that were seen as fearful, tiny, and cute, are now spurious demons that slaughter each and every project in some way. It is utterly important to make note that not one soda received a perfect rating. So, my fellow classmates of AP Composition, we can’t be offended by rejection. After receiving entirely mixed results and feedback, I have concluded that our efforts of rhetoric will always ultimately fail in the eyes of freshmen. Even though we received just one vote, we did not fail in the sense that we captivated the attention of the freshmen. In the long run, to have been able to win this competition, our Soda needed to rank first in multiple categories. From the beginning the feedback on Blank Space was so diverse, that the downward spiral that Blank Space took could be spotted from a mile away. The fans …show more content…
To determine a winner with only eight votes is not a good representation of overall success. In addition to the strange data from voting, our soda “Blank Space” scored in the top three places in almost every category, yet overall it only received one vote? And how is it possible to succeed when the responses didn’t translate from survey to written response on voting day? Some said that our commercial had nothing to do with our theme, yet, 99% of commercials on TV don’t promote the company directly. When it comes to statistics, it is practically impossible to meet the needs of the Freshman