Logo, Pathos, Ethos
Logos is an appeal to logic and reasoning, ethos is an an appeal to credibility …show more content…
Prove it is wearable by children of today and not just a fashion trend from the 1990s.
Improve the FAQ and Updates. Show that work is being consistently done on this project and pledgees can trust you to us their money well.
Provide a planned out budget or at least where you plan to manufacture your clothes and the cost of manufacturing in the location you specify.
Fix the hyperlinks within the social media buttons. Having malfunctioning buttons can send the message that the campaign is not serious or well thought out, this losing pledgee trust.
A highly successful KickStarter campaign that is well fleshed out and has great examples of FAQ and Updates is the World's First Custom Fit Sandals for Personalized Comfort by Wiivv. The campaign launched on March 23rd and in less than a month was 179% funded. This campaign has a goal of $250,000 and ended up raising $448,074. FAQ for this campaign are well fleshed and pay attention to specific details such as shipping, sizes offered, and cost. The Updates section is extremely well fleshed out with regular updates every couple of days since the campaign