Cat vs Dog
Fang Kertim
2/7/13
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Cat VS Dog
(Hook) “Have you ever thought to have a pet?” Pet is a good friend. Which people often telling each other’s that which are better cat or dog? (GDT) Some people say that cats are cute more than a dog. Some they said dogs are more intelligent because they can be trained by their owner or by themself. (Thesis) Cats, however they have more kind of funny move than a dog they just need their caretaker to play with them.
(TS) To begin with, Cat doesn’t like dogs and they are most alike each other. Every time when they see each other they will fight bite and make the keeper get more jobs to do. (1stPt.) First, cats require to brush there fur every single day. That’s means they need more attention, especially from there caretaker. (Ex.) They don’t need to go and walk outside everyday like dogs. But they still need more attention from there caretaker. In contrast, a dogs need a daily exercise from there caretaker that’s means the caretaker have to get up from the comfortable couch and get the dogs for a walk. (2ndPt.) Second, Dogs are “man best friend” is actually true but a cat is also cutest for their owners all so. (Ex.) For the dogs you have to train them to do the thing you want like jump, roll, and shake hands. On the other hands, cats do not need their caretaker to train them they can do an amazing thing by themself. (CS) Therefor, Cats are more likely for a girl but they are also useful to play with.
(TS) In addition, Cats are more amusing than dogs in numerous ways, which makes them enjoyable for entertained. (1stPt.) To start with, a cat will enthusiastically take part in game of cotton ball, while a dog would play a catching the Frisbees. (Ex.) Cats can easily make them to play with you when you want them to play with. Plus, it is sometimes easier to deal with animals than people when a person is frustrated with the world of humans. (2ndPt.) Furthermore, a cat would chase a mouse when they see it
2/7/13
Period B
Cat VS Dog
(Hook) “Have you ever thought to have a pet?” Pet is a good friend. Which people often telling each other’s that which are better cat or dog? (GDT) Some people say that cats are cute more than a dog. Some they said dogs are more intelligent because they can be trained by their owner or by themself. (Thesis) Cats, however they have more kind of funny move than a dog they just need their caretaker to play with them.
(TS) To begin with, Cat doesn’t like dogs and they are most alike each other. Every time when they see each other they will fight bite and make the keeper get more jobs to do. (1stPt.) First, cats require to brush there fur every single day. That’s means they need more attention, especially from there caretaker. (Ex.) They don’t need to go and walk outside everyday like dogs. But they still need more attention from there caretaker. In contrast, a dogs need a daily exercise from there caretaker that’s means the caretaker have to get up from the comfortable couch and get the dogs for a walk. (2ndPt.) Second, Dogs are “man best friend” is actually true but a cat is also cutest for their owners all so. (Ex.) For the dogs you have to train them to do the thing you want like jump, roll, and shake hands. On the other hands, cats do not need their caretaker to train them they can do an amazing thing by themself. (CS) Therefor, Cats are more likely for a girl but they are also useful to play with.
(TS) In addition, Cats are more amusing than dogs in numerous ways, which makes them enjoyable for entertained. (1stPt.) To start with, a cat will enthusiastically take part in game of cotton ball, while a dog would play a catching the Frisbees. (Ex.) Cats can easily make them to play with you when you want them to play with. Plus, it is sometimes easier to deal with animals than people when a person is frustrated with the world of humans. (2ndPt.) Furthermore, a cat would chase a mouse when they see it